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Nov. 11th, 2003 12:12 am*Thwaps NaNoWriMo* You are set in 1899. This means that Bertie cannot have an elder brother who died in the Great War. I don't care what the angst value is. The Great War won't start for another fifteen years. Similarly, this Bertie has very little in common with Bertie Wooster. He does not play the banjolele, and he should not talk as if he's just stepped into the jazz age. Deirdre, you're not a flapper. Don't talk like one.