Is this better?

[changeling]

Okay, revised version of that.


Dear Anthea,

I am sorry to inconvenience you again, but I have a play coming up this week and next, and I can't work my usual shifts. I would have told you earlier, but the week I got confirmation of the dates was also (unluckily) the week you put out the rosters, and so I foolishly thought I could help to arrange to change shifts so as not to bother you.

I have spoken with Emma and Jan, and they are willing to exchange shifts. Liane also indicated that should I be desperate she'd be happy to help with the exchange of a shift on Fridays. In the situation worked out between Jan, Emma and myself, I would work Jan's early morning shift 0800-1200 on 15/8 and 22/8, and she would work my Friday shift 1600-2300 on 16/8 and 23/8. Similarly, I would work Emma's Sunday shift 1400-2300 18/8 and 1600-2300 25/8, and she would work my Saturday shift 1600-2300 on 17/8 and 24/8.

I apologise yet again for the late notice, and I stress that we realise that by no means are any of these changes arranged, but are reliant on your approval.

regards,
Danika.

Comments

[fineliner.livejournal.com]

Yeh I think this is good :) altho you didn't do the "I know you cut sick last time so I was afraid" thing like we talked about...

And *grin* thx for the lj-cut tip :)

[delirieuse.livejournal.com]

You're welcome. :)

Yeh, well, I didn't want to seem that I was making excuses, so I didn't put it in.